Nicky
Coales
DPS Drafts and Feedback
Below is my first draft for the first pages of my double page spread, and below that is the feedback I received from classmates which explores the pros and cons of what I have made. The main aspects I need to alter, after looking at the feedback, is to make the colour of my pull quote more gradual; this can be done by changing the opacity. I also need to make the font easier to read, as well as match the colours in order to keep in form with my house style.
Above is the second part to my DPS, and below that is the feedback for this draft given by my classmates. One of the main points I've seen is that I need to do more to make my questions more explicit with regards to how they are displayed, I could fix this by changing the colour of the questions. I've also learnt, while the blue is a good colour to use, I need to integrate the colours of my house style (black and pink) more. I also need to add and edit my album cover, or decide a different way for that space to be used.
The two DPS drafts seen below are the final drafts, I have made the house style present in both pages as well as making my pages colourful and engaging.
The two DPS drafts below are the second drafts, I have added colour and changed the opacity of my page furniture to make it less explicit. I also added an image, which I may change, but for now is just mean to be a little image to not leave too much space.
Below are the two first drafts of my DPS which the analysis for can be seen above.
 DPS Page 1 Final |  NickyCoalesDPSPage2DraftFINAL_ |  DPS Page 1 Draft 2 |
|---|---|---|
 DPS Page 2 Draft 2 |  DPS Page 1 Draft 1 |  DPS Page 2 Draft 1 |
To the right is what will be my final piece for my double page spread. Changes made include an integration of my logo, as it hasn't made as much as an appearence as I would have wanted it to. I also replaced the image in the bottom right corner of the second page with a QR code, as the image look unprofessional, as a QR code would add a social media aspect to my magazine which would make it look modern.
